The Seven C’s of Effective Communication
Chapter 5: The Seven C’s of Effective Communication
Part 2: The Craft of Effective Business Writing
Chapter Introduction
Effective business writing is not a matter of luck or innate talent; it is a skill built on a foundation of clear principles. The "Seven C's" provide a practical checklist for ensuring your written messages are professional, effective, and well-received. Mastering these principles will help you create documents that achieve their purpose, respect the reader's time, and build goodwill.
5.1 Completeness
A complete message provides the reader with all the information they need to understand the situation and take any required action. To ensure completeness, you should:
- Provide all necessary information: Anticipate and answer all potential questions a reader might have.
- Answer all questions asked: Address every question the reader has asked, both directly stated and implied.
- Give something extra, when desirable: If you can provide additional helpful information (without being wordy), do so. This adds value and shows a thoughtful, service-oriented approach.
An incomplete message is costly because it often requires follow-up correspondence, wasting time and potentially leading to a loss of goodwill, loss of valued customers, and loss of sales. In contrast, effective, complete communication helps in gaining a good name and maintaining positive business relationships.
5.2 Conciseness
Conciseness means expressing your message in the fewest possible words without sacrificing the other C's (clarity, completeness, etc.). A concise message is brief but complete.
- Eliminate wordy expressions: Avoid filler phrases like "at this point in time" (use "now").
- Include only relevant material: Stick to the purpose of the message and omit rambling sentences or obvious information.
- Avoid unnecessary repetition: Don't say the same thing in multiple ways unless it's for emphasis.
- Technique: Use a shorter name after a long one has been mentioned (e.g., "Business Communication Center" becomes "Communication Center").
Crucial Distinction: Conciseness should not be misinterpreted as simple brevity if it leads to an incomplete message.
5.3 Consideration (The "You-Attitude")
Consideration means preparing every message with the reader in mind. It involves putting yourself in their shoes and focusing on their needs, interests, and perspective. This is often called the "you-attitude."
- Focus on the reader's benefit: Instead of focusing on what you want, highlight what the reader will gain.
- Show sincere concern: This demonstrates empathy and respect, making the reader more receptive to your message.
- Emphasize the positive: Frame information in a positive light whenever possible.
5.4 Concreteness
Concrete writing is specific, definite, and vivid rather than vague and general. It uses precise language and facts to create a clear picture for the reader.
- Use specific facts and figures: Instead of saying "He got a good score," say "His GPA in 2000 was 3.9 on a four-point scale."
- Use active rather than passive verbs: The active voice is more direct and forceful. For example, "The Dean decided" is more concrete than the passive "A decision has been made."
- Use vivid, image-building words: Choose words that create a clear picture in the reader's mind.
- Avoid using passive verbs as they often create vague and impersonal sentences.
5.5 Clarity
Clarity means getting your message from your head into the reader's head accurately. The goal is to use language that is so clear it cannot be misunderstood.
- Choose precise words: Use words that have a clear, single meaning in the context.
- Ensure coherence: The relationship between parts of a sentence must be clear. A sentence like "The Jeep is in the garage that he broken" lacks coherence because it's unclear what was broken (the Jeep or the garage).
- Structure sentences logically.
5.6 Courtesy
Courtesy goes beyond politeness; it involves showing genuine respect and concern for the reader.
- Be sincere and tactful: Adopt a "you-attitude."
- Use positive and courteous wording: Avoid blunt, accusatory, or irritating expressions. For example, instead of "You did not read my recent letter," a more courteous phrasing is "Please refer to my June 10 letter."
- Respond promptly: Delaying a response can be seen as disrespectful and is damaging to the writer-reader relationship. Responding late is therefore not a guideline for courtesy.
5.7 Correctness
Correctness in business writing refers to several key aspects:
- Use correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling.
- Ensure the accuracy of words, information, and data.
- Use the right level of language for the audience (e.g., formal vs. informal).
Important Note: Document design elements like font style and cleanliness, while important for a professional appearance, are not considered core components of textual correctness.
Interactive Quiz
Test your knowledge on the Seven C's. Read each question carefully, select your answer, and check your understanding! Good luck! 💡
Question No: 1
Which one of the following should not be interpreted to mean brevity, which will result in an incomplete message?
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Conciseness
Explanation: As noted in section 5.2, conciseness means being brief but complete. It should not be confused with brevity that sacrifices necessary information, leading to an incomplete message.
Question No: 2
Which of the following is NOT a result of incomplete messages?
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Gaining a good name
Explanation: Incomplete messages are costly and damaging, leading to a loss of goodwill, customers, and sales. Gaining a good name is a result of effective, complete communication.
Question No: 3
All of the following are the elements of effective written communication, EXCEPT:
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Cleanliness
Explanation: The "Seven C's" are the core elements of effective communication. While cleanliness is a desirable quality for a physical document, it is not one of the fundamental textual principles like Courtesy, Correctness, and Conciseness.
Question No: 4
Which one of the following is not required to keep conciseness in writing?
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Adding extra and unrelated information
Explanation: Conciseness is achieved by eliminating wordiness and sticking to relevant information. Adding extra and unrelated information is the opposite of being concise.
Question No: 5
In order to achieve conciseness in writing, short names are used after using the full names. What would be the suitable short name for "Business Communication Center" out of the following options?
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Communication Center
Explanation: Using a shorter, clear name after the full name has been introduced is a key technique for conciseness. "Communication Center" is the most logical and clear shortened version provided.
Question No: 6
"The Jeep is in the garage that he broken." This given sentence lacks which of the following qualities of effective written communication?
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Coherence (and Correctness)
Explanation: The sentence lacks coherence because the modifier "that he broken" is misplaced, making it unclear whether the garage or the Jeep was broken. It also lacks correctness because "broken" is the wrong verb form; it should be "broke." Both are valid issues, but coherence addresses the logical connection between the ideas.
Question No: 7
"The Dean decided" is more explicit than "A decision has been made". This statement refers to which of the following characteristics of concreteness?
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Use of active rather than passive verbs
Explanation: Using the active voice ("The Dean decided") makes the writing more concrete and direct by clearly identifying the doer of the action. The passive voice ("A decision has been made") is more vague and less forceful.
Question No: 8
Which of the following is an example of concreteness?
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► His GPA in 2000 was 3.9 on a four-point scale.
Explanation: Concreteness is achieved by using specific, quantifiable facts and figures. This option provides a precise GPA, a year, and the scale, making it far more concrete than vague terms like "good score" or "highest score."
Question No: 9
All of the following guidelines play a part in making your writing concrete, EXCEPT:
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Use passive verbs
Explanation: Concrete writing is specific and forceful. This is achieved by using active verbs, vivid words, and specific details. Using passive verbs generally makes writing more vague and less concrete.
Question No: 10
Which of the following is not a guideline for courteous writing?
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Respond late
Explanation: A key component of courtesy is promptness. Delaying a response suggests a lack of respect for the reader's time and concerns, which is damaging to the relationship.
Question No: 11
Which of the following sentences has courteous wording?
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Please refer to my June 10 letter.
Explanation: "You did not read my recent letter" is a blunt and accusatory statement. The courteous alternative is the polite request, "Please refer to my June 10 letter," which achieves the same goal without assigning blame.
Question No: 12
When applied to business messages, 'correctness' means all of the following, EXCEPT:
Correct Answer & Explanation
Correct Answer: ► Check font style
Explanation: Correctness in business writing refers to the accuracy of the content and the adherence to language rules (grammar, punctuation, spelling). Font style is an element of document formatting and design, not correctness of the message itself.